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| 제목 | my niece | 등록일 | 2025-12-22 |
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| 내용 | I went to my mother's house last Friday. I have a Christmas vacation and I was thinking of rest. But my niece looks forward to meet me. She want to play with me. I had to play online game with her. And we were watching YouTube that it's very childish. When I didn't see her smartphone, she replayed that content until I watch. Today she went school but she didn't go to piano lesson. I took her to a kid's Cafe. I just have played with her a little while ago before speaking English by phone. | ||
| 담당강사 | Rina2 | 등록일 | 2025-12-22 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I went to my mother's house last Friday. - I went to my mother's house last Friday. I have a Christmas vacation and I was thinking of rest. But my niece looks forward to meet me. - I had a Christmas vacation and I was thinking of taking a rest. But my niece looks forward to meet me. - However my niece was looking forward to see me. She want to play with me. - She wanted to play with me. I had to play online game with her. - I had to play online game with her. And we were watching YouTube that it's very childish. - We also watched a lot of childish videos on YouTube. When I didn't see her smartphone, she replayed that content until I watch. - When I wasn't looking at her smartphone, she would play the same content until I watched it. Today she went school but she didn't go to piano lesson. - Today she went school but she didn't go to piano lesson. I took her to a kid's Cafe. - I took her to a kid's Cafe. I just have played with her a little while ago before speaking English by phone. - I was playng with her before I took my Englsh phone class. |
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